My Writing goals

My Writing goals
Use a range of punctuation correctly.
Correctly use paragraphing

Yesterday we watched a netball game it was Teachers against the students it was too bad for the students but it wasn't  a real frashing because they did not get that much points then the other people went to go to eden park i never got to go they got to go and get to have their own bike ohh i wish i went it looked so much fun.

Jahleena,George.V and Spencer,Space inquiry

Information report about Mercury

 We are learning to write an information report about a topic related to space.

By Friday 5 June you need to have written and edited your information report on a topic related to space so that it is ready to be published.

Here are some ideas to write about:

• Jupiter
• Astronauts
• Earth    
• The Moon
• Eclipses
• Stars

My topic is:

You need to attend one workshop with the teacher on an area that you feel you need help with for your writing. Here is the timetable where you will make your bookings. There is space for seven people in each workshop so book in quickly to make sure there is space!

Start researching and plan your writing here: (remember to write notes in your plan). Click here to see an exemplar of a plan.

Introduction:
Main idea:	More detail:	More detail:
Main idea:	More detail:	More detail:
Main idea:	More detail:	More detail:

Success Criteria for writing. Click here to see an exemplar of an information report about Mars.

Level 3	Student Targets:	Yes!
Audience and Purpose	Identify my audience and purpose for writing.
Content/Ideas	Write clearly and include all important information.
	Add factual detail to expand my ideas.
Structure: including punctuation and grammar	Use different sentence starters.
	Join some ideas using conjunctions such as: when, while, after, since, until, if, because, although, that
	Organise my ideas into paragraphs and sequence my ideas so that my writing flows.
	Use subheadings for each new paragraph to tell the reader what it is about
	Check that I am writing in the present tense (for example: the sun is a ball of fire; the stars are shooting through the sky)
	Use a range of punctuation correctly.    (.,?!)
Editing	Identify and correct most spelling errors.
	Improve my writing so that it is more enjoyable/informative for the reader.

Start your writing here:

Introduction                     Mercury

Did you know that Mercury is the closest planet to Sun

Size

Have you ever wondered how big and long Mercury is the smallest planet in the solar system. (Pluto used to hold the title, but it was downgraded to a dwarf planet.) Although its surface resembles our moon, the tiny planet has a density that rivals Earth itself. Mercury's diameter is 3,030 miles (4,878 km), comparable to the size of the continental United States. This makes it about two-fifths the size of Earth. It is smaller than Jupiter's moon Ganymede and Saturn's moon Titan.

Surface of Mercury

Have you ever realized that the Mercury looks like the Earth's Moon it looks like earth’s Moon because the surface is covered in craters and it is very very rocky and is a planet close to the earth mars and venus.

my name in New Zealand sign launguage

This week we have been learning some sign launguage in Flox class.This is a link to my name in NZSL.

Can you sign your name.

Anzac letters from soldiers

All about me

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