This week in writing we have been using precise nouns to make our writing more specific for the reader.
We took a paragraph and changed the nouns from general nouns to precise nouns.
Here is an example.
In the weekend I had to do lots of shopping with my Mum. We went to the
shop diary to get some
food steak. We also went to look for a present for my cousin’s birthday. I had to choose between
a doll cool barbie doll and a
soft toy teddy bear. After that we went to the warehouse to buy some clothes, I got two new
items stuff and a pair of
shoes footwear. Because I had been so good, mum took me to the shop to buy an
ice block cold ice block. Lucky me!
